What do you think about my first ever video demonstrating feature of my app in less than 2 minutes?

I here's my 2 cents: hopefully you won't think it's too brutal:

1. It's waaaay too slow. No one will look at it, it's to be frank, boring.
   2.In the first minute, and I haven't seen anything new or useful that I don't already have in my "Samsung notes" - or any other simple notes app ever
2. You're showing a phone app in landscape - while there are good cases for it, I don't think yours is. My advice is to make it directly portrait - and in that case, you'll even be able to publish it as #shorts. Which brings me to the next thing:
3. Nobody cares about seeing you typing... You should use that space to actually describe your app.
4. Focus on 2-3 things that make your app unique, and describe them on fast forward with a cool + fast upbeat music.

Hope this helps!

My 2 cents: try to avoid using texts. A picture worth thousands of words. What is your value proposition - a few words should describe it.
Is your feature unique? Is your design more user-friendly? Why people should use it?

I liked it! I think i's pretty clear 👌🏻

I'm not sure if it's just me, but at some point it felt like "tl;dr", I think it depends on where are you putting the video? like in a landing page? to send to your users?

First off, I much liked reading that you had fun creating it! I think this is a great sign in general 🙂

Two thoughts:

I think further clarification on the intention of the video is needed: (1) In which context will it be viewed (on a landing page / on a features page / on your YouTube channel / could even be on social media / ....)? (2) Who is the target audience (power users / new users / potential users / people, who never thought about managing notes / ...)?

Then, it's possible to figure out how others did achieve it already.

Personally, I would recommend checking out the videos of Firebase. I think they did a great job at videos explaining their platform. Particularly, this video's intention might be close to your video's intention: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O17OWyx08Cg

Cheers!

You should replace the explainer text on the left with your face, it's much more interesting and incentivizes to follow along