Imagine you run an exec coaching program.
Here’s the sales email Dave would send:
The goal is simple. Get a reply.
A reply gives you something to work with.
So how does Dave do that?
Keeps it short. Asks a question.
Much better than a hit and hope sales template asking for a “quick call”.
Watcha think?!
I like it but not on a first touch
This is great! I noticed that the shorter and more direct the intention of the pitch is the better the response.
Thoughts about branding? I think it makes or breaks the pitch itself.
I’ve been testing a 9-word email format with warm
lead or leads that have gone dormant. It’s been working to ignite conversations. Coupled with a short 2 word subject line I’ve been averaging a 50%+ open rate.
A bit arrogant to get that email from someone you don't know. But I'm not a CEO so YMMV
i agree. but no cold email is perfect
Like it ! It sticks to the brain because its clear and accurate.
Did you reply ? 😄
never emailed it to me. but i probably would have
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Yeah... Definitely no Hey CEO.
CEO is just the template word. He'd definitely right Hey Juris