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Hey there! I am working on my product BuildFaster.io and you can check out the landing page here.
Currently, I have only made the home, blog, and terms page. Any feedback would be very much appreciated! 😄
Love the site - however I found that only by scrolling i realize what ur site is about...
"BuildFaster sells HTML themes with the latest trends and styles." Use this in the header instead of that long animation about building sites in months, days, years, whatvz
Yes I know it sounds less sexy this way but you can play around with the copy but the meaning remains true to your business goals a.k.a. selling good looking themes.
kinda like "Nobody wants an ugly duckling design. Check these pretty themes!"
BOOM CTA "view themes"
Another option:
"Not an e-commerce, I got you fam.."
Then list other verticals people who arent selling shoes might be still intersted in purchasing
| mobile apps
| services
| portfolios
| agencies
| blogs
and then create subpages for each vertical you can try to sell like:
buildfaster.xyz/ecommerce
buildfaster.xyz/mobile-app
buildfaster.xyz/services
Thanks @orliesaurus! This helps a ton! I'll tell you how it goes.
I don't understand how exactly are you enabling developers to build faster. Are you providing pre-made templates that one can use?
Yes I am selling templates that are easy to use. I'm sorry. I failed to say that above.
In that case, isn't build websites in minutes a huge exaggeration? You may want to change it to "Build websites faster" but I'll leave it up to you.
Why not change "Yep. That's not a typo" to "Our pre-made templates help you go from zero to live in no time." or something to that effect? "Yep. That's not a typo" doesn't offer me any information. I would prefer to know how exactly are you going to help me make my website development faster.
I would recommend you adding feedback widget to your website just so your visitors could leave you a feedback comment just in case.
Btw, it is dead easy to setup feedback widget on your website, give howuku.com a try! :)
Hi Brayden! My Notes:
I'm looking for a review too, help me out!
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/is-my-cta-too-vague-do-you-quickly-understand-the-purpose-of-my-site-8e88496a1c