Need help reviewing my focus app 🙏

As product men, we all know the user experience problems, features of the product. sometimes we split the feathers into pieces.

At the same time, only the product man can draw the whole picture of the product. so we want to build a car, but ship to the customer a skateboard first.

The problem is the destination is so far, how we push the product forward. salespeople give me a deep impact, in fact, some sales proud to sell the hard deals thing. every prototype is hard to deal with, try to add some simple features and send an email to sell to your user directly.

feedback is important, but only sales could get real feedback.

Hi Patz,

Here are my thoughts after taking a good look at the landing page and using the app:

The lading page:

• too much info in one place.
• it doesn’t tell me clearly what I get if I sign up
• It doesn’t tell me how it work

The app:

• is to simple
• is very unclear where should I start at
• all groups are the same, or at least this is what I understand.
• after stopping the “focus” time it doesn’t tell me anything about it.

How I see everything:

The landing page:

• clear information about the app and how it’s working. videos and screenshot will help a lot.
• what what I get using the app

The app:

• a clear user flow with intuitive UX
• information and stats about every sessions, the second you finished it.
• graphs about my journey using the app. (goals?)

Vlad

Here's some notes:

• Landing page certainly needs some editing. There's too much there and I wasn't interested in reading any of it. Said another way, it's not interesting. Cut cut cut.
• I don't like the magic link email pattern, but that's probably just me.
• Hit an error after setting a username + bio. Message said "Not signed in"
• Second time I tried the above step I got through.
• I was presented with a bunch of rooms. No idea what these are for.
• I picked a room and went in. I see other people are in the room, but all I can do is look at their bios. I'm a bit confused.
• There's a coffee cup and a sound wave button at the bottom of the room. I press these, but can't figure out what they do.

I think you've built a bit too much without trying things out on real users. When I was a game developer, we used to get random people into the office to play our games. We'd give the people a tablet with the game at the home screen. Then we'd watch them play it without teaching them how to play it. We did this to see if people understood the how to play the game "in the wild."

I think you should do some experiments like that.