Need urgent feedback on the landing page
Hi everyone,
I'd appreciate your genuinely honest feedback about the landing page of my upcoming product:
https://with-a-view.com/ext/
Please let me know:
What is your first impression?
What do you think this product is and what it does?
What would you like to change?
Will you try it?
So looking forward to all the responses.
Thank you in advance.
Trending on Indie Hackers
Google Whisk - Generate images using images as prompts, not text prompts
After 19,314 lines of code, i'm shutting down my project
Need feedback for my product.
We are live on Product Hunt
Don't be a Jerk. Use this Tip Calculator.
Try adding parallaxes to all your images
Thanks for your feedback, @BraydenTW. Can you please explain how would it help?
Well, if you just add
background-position: fixed;to the image backgrounds, it will look amazing. Trust me, you should try it out. 😄Okie dokie. Will try it :)
When i first opened the page (on a mobile) I didn’t know what your message was. It is better to have an action item on the top and tell people what you do or how you help them.
I dont get the with-...’triangle’...-view
The site doesn’t work that well on mobile device’s
I am afraid I wouldn’t use the site
Awesome. Really appreciate your feedback. I agree with you that I need to make it more clear already above the fold. What was your understanding of with-...’triangle’...-view?
It would help me to know what kind of problems you faced on the mobile landing page. What was not working?
I am only looking into what the 'triangle' means now because you asked me, otherwise if i was a potential customer you would have already lost me, but it is clear once you look at the URL. You will have a very high bounce rate if people can't understand the with-a-view slogan. I would make it clear 'a', and not try and be clever with the logo. Confusion is your enemy.
Thank you so much @Cannonball2134
I will get the triangle change to "A". You are absolutely right confusion is the biggest enemy. Did you have any other difficulties or would you suggest any other changes?
Let me know when you have updated the site with 'A's and i will have another look
Changed it to "A", as suggested by you :)
Will be glad to hear more!
The changes have not updated on my browser, but i had another look anyway. Is there any reason you don't have an email signup? It is a good way to gather potential users, and maybe a newsletter would be another way to share the images.
I would try and make the website even more clear, i only really got what the product was after looking at the text for a minute. Ideally it should only take the user a few seconds to understand what the product is.
I would remove
Eat | Drink | Sleep | with-∆-view
It doesn't clearly show what your product is.
I would add something like
"Turn every new tab into a beautiful view"
"Discover beautiful bars and hotels on every new tab"
You could add a gif animation of the process of adding the extension to opening a new tab and seeing an image.
Hope that helps
What is your first impression?
The purple CTA for Chrome is a little too juxtaposing and doesn't really work with the rest of the design. Secondly, I would suggest changing the image of the woman in the red swimsuit. It might deter some potential customers and also is a little too eye-catching compared to the other images used.
I really like the icon you've used and the images chosen as they present a sense of luxury and adventure.
What do you think this product is and what it does?
I would assume that whilst searching tabs, related items of dining experiences, holiday packages etc would be suggested to you? Similar to honey for discounts.
What would you like to change?
Please see my initial 2 points in your first question.
Will you try it?
I would try it if it gave me a bit more information on what it entails and if possibly there was a screengrab displaying how it would be presented to me on other Chrome tabs.
---- Overall, I think it looks great, I hope that my 3 suggestions are useful or at least possibly give you a different perspective ---
Thank you so much for your awesome feedback!
Purple CTA is used for branding reasons, but I do agree with your reasoning. I have also replaced the image of the woman in the red swimsuit.
Please check it (with-a-view.com) and let me know your views now.
Awesome, yeah that is a great image choice!
Is your branding purple?
Best of luck and happy to help with reviewing if needed. :)
I like the idea of discovering new places on a new tab.
I agree that you need to be clearer on the initial viewport. I think you need to find an answer to the question why anyone would want to switch their current "new tab" page to your alternative. That would need to become your first line on your page. Sort of your value prop. Think of the alternative (default new tab function) and how your solution does it better. Make that clear as soon as possible.
Are you pulling your content from a pre-selected database or is it dynamic (google maps api or the like)? There might be another value prop if you make it more personal (dicover new places near you).
Another thing that might be very personal but maybe to consider: The lady in the red bathing suit is NSFW for my workspace. I would never install this knowing that this might pop up on my screen when co-workers are around.
Great feedback. I have made appropriate changes based on the feedback. Please check now (with-a-view.com) and let me know your opinion.