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Please roast my new landing page

by Mateopp

Hello IH,

I just pivot a previous idea of selling fixed price web pages into something new. Do you understand the idea? the CTA is ok? do you think the price is fair? my target is non-technical entrepreneurs. :)

Thanks a lot!!

https://mvpmaker.co/

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 on May 19, 2020
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    Hey there,

    Look and feel are good. But there's some minor copy errors / awkward working that really hurts the credibility of the site.

    You may want to consider hiring a copywriter.

    User Avatar Magic
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      Thanks a lot Magic, english is my worst weakness , I will follow your advise and hire a copywriter.

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    Hey, here is my 2 cents:

    • You should put the benefit for the customer as the hero. Explain in the subhero. Looks like you do the opposite
    • The get started button does not work in the hero
    • The HubSpot link seems to be broken

    I understand the big picture. I feel like I need to be reassured about the quality of the outcome.
    Hope that helps

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    5 years ago
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      Thanks for your feedback xavier. it helps me a lot.

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    Getting a timeout on the page.. maybe you were deploying code when I tried to access it?

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    5 years ago
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      I think so, I am sorry I just update an issue before.

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