Hey IH!
Hope you all are doing well. We just put up the landing page for Confetti last week. We're still working on our v1 at the moment, but we thought it was a good time to put ourselves out there.
Since it's our first landing page, we would appreciate a good, clean, salt-of-the-earth roast. A few questions that come to mind:
Really appreciate the help!
P.S.
If you're intrigued by what we're building, we also included a newsletter sign-up so you can stay up-to-date for when we launch.
The blurry background flashes while loading. It's distracting. It also has a weird scroll effect. Why don't you have a simpler background?
Copy is super clear.
"question bank" I'd say resource or directory or something else
Thanks for the feedback @kaioelfke. I appreciate your input.
Great work so far!
The value proposition is clear. It could be shorter, e.g. "Learn the skills to find your dream job in AI".
The blurry background is weird.
For the cards: I would prefer more of a story telling me how it works. E.g. "1. Learn with our database", "2. Test your knowledge", "3. Ace your interview."
Thanks for the feedback @whereismypen and for taking the time to provide input!
Thanks @mccall for the detailed breakdown and for taking the time!
Happy to help! This landing page copy template from PH is a good example https://uselander.xyz
Great find thanks for the share!
Feedback
-How is the look and feel? I personally think the blurred background is a bit misleading. In some apps the blurred background indicates that the page hasn't finished loading. The background of your cards conflict with the images in the cards (two shades of yellow). Maybe make them with a white background and add a drop shadow? The logo is a bit hard to read. It doesn't look like its optimized for mobile - this is going to be important.
-Is it clear what we're doing? My understanding is that you will be building something like Kaggle? An online community for people interested in developing their AI skills?
-Is there anything we can do to improve our messaging/copy? The slogan is good - I think i understand what you are trying to achieve. Only comment would be for your second card indicate that you will build systems on the confetti platform.
Hope this helps - all the best!
Thanks @robertdippolito -- the feedback definitely helped. I appreciate it!
Hey, I'm a Junior Web Dev. So here are some points related more on the design stuff:
For the content, yeah it's pretty clear! You are giving educational advice about IA
Thank you @IndependenceDev for your feedback. Really appreciate your thoughts.