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Roast my landing page/concept

Hey friends,

Just shipped this. Please tell me why it's bad. https://www.bravoteams.com/jobseeker

James

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Landing Page Feedback
on May 22, 2020
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    Great work in general. The value proposition is clear and its well done overall. I think it's actually better on mobile, which leads to my only criticism - I think your desktop version might have too much negative space.
    Screebshot: https://prnt.sc/smj7iz

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    Here's what I liked about your landing page:

    1. Nice logo
    2. The website illustrations are very good
    3. The "FIND YOUR TEAM" CTA is clear and visible
    4. Overall, the design is pretty good. Good Job!

    Here's what I'd recommend you improve:

    1. You do not have favicon in your website. The browser tab does not show logo.
    2. The Special Offer text is wayyyy to long. Maybe you can add a horizontal bar at the top with green background that gives alert of discount.(like in the landing page of bravoteams, also red color sends signals of alert. I'd recommend using different shades green or blue check colorhunt.co or coolors.co )
    3. Your theme color is Blue. Try using a different shade of blue. This one is too bright.
    4. In a 1080p browser desktop, the heading text doesn't look big enough. So make it even bigger.
    5. Too much space in the feature section. I am not sure users will care about it.
    6. Like I said in 2, remove the special offer text from it's current position and put it at the top

    These are pretty much it. If you want a FAQ support widget for bravoteams, I could help you integrate my startup's widget insteps.io pretty easily either for free or for $3/mo according to your financial situation. :)

    1. 2

      Thanks for the detailed reply, I'll make some tweaks.

  3. 1

    Awesome concept! I like the colors, graphics and gifs are great.

    I would look into the typography a bit though. Find a font that's as playful as your color pallet while staying professional. White space is great, but I think you could get away with using a bigger text size, especially in the header.

    Really cool idea. I'm also building a site targeted towards job seekers (jobhuntbuddy.co) and I'd love to connect.

    1. 1

      Thanks, admittedly we mailed in the font choice. We'll take a look.

  4. 1

    Hey James! Nice concept! Do you think a simple theme like this one would help out a lot? You'll be done in minutes for a low price. I will start selling my themes for BuildFaster in a few days.

    Tell me what you think! 😀

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