Y'all roasted my landing page last time. Is it better now?
After y'all roasted my landing page last time, we went and revamped it.
The gist of the feedback was that nobody "got it" and the landing page didn't do a good job of explaining the USP or value prop.
I hope this new page does both of those things. I tried to explain exactly what it is and why you would want to use it.
Let me know if we still suck at this. Here is the new landing page.
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I'm not a .net dev, but I get the idea as dev.
Visually it looks nice and there's many concise descriptions of benefits and features.
I agree on the social proof though.
Maybe even something like for customer XYZ it was like this before and after it is like that now.
Anyway the page looks good enough for me so I personally would not prioritize it over other work.
Thanks for the feedback. I agree about the testimonials, but we need to get some users first 😬.
I didn't see your first landing page but this one seems okay.
Need just a little bit of customer testimonials and "human touch" - I see a lot of illustrations and not enough happy clients!
Oh and less text mostly everywhere, less is more when it comes to homepages (as opposed to hyperfocused marketing landing pages)
Anyway I've added your page to our watch-list. Hope you don't mind?
We're going to break it down during our LIVE product design session >> https://www.indiehackers.com/post/announcement-product-design-ama-livestream-on-may-12th-0a220ba2fd
Thanks, I'll check it out.